Ah,
How I wish You could Hear what I Hear,
and See what I See ...
if there is one person who understands
the falling rain,
the changing tone,
and the trembling leaves,
in the night breeze.
(PS. My teacher read this poem, and kindly suggested an ellipse would end it better than a period. Readers may choose whatever form they want for this poem, or create new ones. Poem is just a way to rouse feelings, and it serves differently for everyone. How it should be written, in this sense, is not confined to a single individual's understanding.)
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